Untitled (inspired by verse from Uaeio)
secrets of longevity is but whispers contained within alcoves where acolytes drink moans from oak barrels filled with consecrated tears combining panic stricken toasts buttered for Iagos consumption...
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shouldn't it be (are) instead of (is)?that word alcoytes, very spookythank you for the new wordIago, not a very nicecharacter. Sneaky likea snake.The ending was funny. Made mesmile, and I realize the...
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Quote:secrets of longevityI assume we are talking about a title? I see where 'is' works. I enjoyed the voice. Not bad at all, Paura. xo
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quixotik 1,Actually is is deliberate, leading in. I did give it some thought about the are after you mentioned it, and decided to keep it the way it is. Thanks for looking an leaving some feedback!
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Ferro!,fancy meeting you here... Actually, i think I like Untitled (inspired by verse from Uaeio) as a title the more I think about it!
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